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Old 02-16-2012, 02:27 PM   #1
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After a unfortunate break-up, John and Sam find themselves in a “Psychedelic” whirlpool of lost and forgotten love.

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Old 02-20-2012, 02:03 AM   #2
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That's an 8 minute film stretched out to 15 minutes.

With sharper dialogue & a faster cut, you'd have a pretty good flick. Drama doesn't need to drag.
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Old 02-20-2012, 01:49 PM   #3
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agree with above post. but i salute the effort put into this
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