I thought it was pretty good, there were only two little things that urked me about it - when the guy gets the idea to start his own riot, the shot zooms in slightly, then it cuts to a close shot of his face. Getting rid of the during-filming zooming from that would get rid of the problem. Also, the sound during the outside sections was way too
clean, and it was obvious you added it in afterwards, not so much with the other sections of the film though. You could possibly try increasing the background noise volume, so that it doesn't feel so disconnected in terms of volume?
Very, very good piece though, definitely looking forward to the next part