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Old 11-13-2011, 01:50 PM   #1
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Please critique my work

Hi, I am new in this forum and would like to hear any comments and suggestions.

http://vimeo.com/9821026

http://vimeo.com/9486537

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Old 11-13-2011, 03:34 PM   #2
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Well, "LIHIM" seemed pretty good. I'm not really a good judge when it comes to music videos however.

I thought "Annabelle" looked real good, but was it meant to have no sound?
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Old 11-13-2011, 04:58 PM   #3
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Agreed...I loved Annabelle as wel. The licht of the last hal seen was realy good. Shower schene and stairway scene.....realy good shots.
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Old 11-13-2011, 09:25 PM   #4
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"Annabelle" was the first thing I did when I got my first super 8 camera. It was an attempt to do a lighting exercise,
shot to edit on camera and at the same time do a camera test.

Thanks guys, I appreciate the feedback.
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Old 11-14-2011, 03:13 PM   #5
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Love Annabelle as well. You should update with a soundtrack.
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Old 11-14-2011, 05:10 PM   #6
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Wel jou could make..... Pi 2...
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Old 07-30-2012, 01:42 PM   #7
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The music video was interesting. But the bands audio could be better.. But good work.
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