teaser trailer for my first short film

[sunchaser]

hi,

here is my first teaser trailer for my first short film which is unfinished as of yet. am just looking for some feedback or advice, thanks.

Alice lost is a short film about a girl in search of her love, she enters a mysterious forest in search of passage to the 'last island' where she believes her love to be.

[Uranium City]

Nice...does just what a teaser should do, and that's make me eagerly anticipate the formal trailer. Was the bird on the opening landscape actually there, or did you add it?

Sounds like you have an interesting story and I'm looking forward to seeing it.

[sunchaser]

Originally Posted by Uranium City

Nice...does just what a teaser should do, and that's make me eagerly anticipate the formal trailer. Was the bird on the opening landscape actually there, or did you add it?

Sounds like you have an interesting story and I'm looking forward to seeing it.

thanks a lot, yeah it was a real bird, it flew up and back across the screen couldnt have directed it better myself lol.

having jumped in at the deep end , production is kind of floating around in the middle of the ocean just now, hope to get it finished soon and then try do a bigger production with the full story next year.