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Old 12-06-2013, 12:30 AM   #1
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Idea Gone In A Flash

Hi everyone! I'm new to filmmaking, but the second I picked up a camera in my film class this semester I fell in love with it. I entered an assignment into a contest based on YouTube viewpoint, and it would really mean a lot to me if you watched my 1 min 30 sec PSA! I know it's not the best, but I made this about two weeks into my class.

If I win, I'm going to use the prize money to buy my own camera and equipment for future productions. I'm up against some tough competition so every view counts! Thanks for your time!

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Old 12-08-2013, 06:24 PM   #2
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Good job! Very strong. Though I would suggest making the impact more instant. I saw the vehicle in front, I kinda saw happening a few seconds before it happened. If it were more "Boom" and had more feeling It would be better. But I liked the traveling back effect, of going to the places were she was gone. Good work. Defediantly sharing this!
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