Great work. I will say, you are growing as a filmmaker at an impressive rate since first posting on this site. This is what, your fourth bigger project in the past 6 months? That's commendable on its own.
Some feedback I have: the relationship between Ashikara and Johnny wasn't entirely clear for a while. The b&w flashback did help, however.
Some more coverage would have been nice. I like the wides of the alley in the beginning, but beyond that, its hard to get emotionally involved into some of the characters.
Excited to see your next project!
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