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Old 03-13-2018, 12:15 PM   #1
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The Other Me (my short horror film)



My first short film in over 4 years, just honing the skills again. Mistakes were made, but would rather make them here while costs are low and hopefully improve as a filmmaker.

Caveat: Didn't have access to actor so bribed my brother in law into doing it so I KNOW the acting should be better!

Any other feedback would be welcome.

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Great job!!! I liked it. I'm a sucker for horror anyways.

Personally, I would have liked to have seen some more "dramatic lighting" around the table, maybe. But that's just my opinion. I dig the overall idea though.
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Great job!!! I liked it. I'm a sucker for horror anyways.

Personally, I would have liked to have seen some more "dramatic lighting" around the table, maybe. But that's just my opinion. I dig the overall idea though.
Thanks! That was the original plan, but had some space and lighting technical problems... lesson learnt!
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Good stuff.
There's some orange-ish light around your eyes & neck, it adds to the mood.
How'd you get that?
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Old 03-25-2018, 02:57 PM   #5
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Good stuff.
There's some orange-ish light around your eyes & neck, it adds to the mood.
How'd you get that?
It's not me but that was a mixture of lighting and grade. Didn't get it perfect but you live and learn.
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Old 03-25-2018, 05:43 PM   #6
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Cool. Looking forward to your next one.
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