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Old 10-29-2017, 11:31 PM   #1
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Trailer - 1st & Main: the Runaway

We have launched the first full trailer for 1st & Main: the Runaway



Feel free to drop questions, or critiques.

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Synopsis, please.
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Synopsis, please.
Was holding off just to see if people could gather some of the plots from the trailer.

The lead girl (Krista) runs away from a troubled home and befriends a group of streetkids. During her experience, she learns much about real life.
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What did you film/edit on?
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Old 10-30-2017, 05:21 PM   #5
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For some strange reason that story seems familiar. As if I've seen another trailer with the same concept or it was yours. :/
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It could use a better ending but you have some nice images.
The titles are a bit weird, especially how they animate into each other.
It feels like they're from a kids cartoon show.
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