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Old 11-09-2018, 11:24 AM   #16
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Oh sh** really?

what is the sentence that implies that bunch of angles are attending a parley? what's the name of this parley?

That's a called a tool conference
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That's a called a tool conference
come on man I'm serious.

Parley is sort of a conference specially for people on opposing sides right? So if bunch of angels() are attending a parley, you can't name the parley "Angels' parley"?

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Old 11-09-2018, 11:32 AM   #18
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I'm serious too.

You spelled Angle not Angel. Parley is not a word we use regularly and would not sound right in a title.

Plus it does not even make sense for the film, to me.
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Old 11-09-2018, 11:38 AM   #19
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You spelled Angle not Angel.
Oh right.My bad.

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Plus it does not even make sense for the film, to me.
I guess I went too deep . I spare you the details on how I came up with this title.
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Angle's parley = tool conference
It was good man
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I'm sure he appreciates all suggestions. The hope is one of ours triggers the right one, not necessarily that we will suggest the right one.
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Angle's parley = tool conference
It was good man
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Old 11-11-2018, 05:34 AM   #23
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I think the main elements here are:
1. Mom is a spirit, died at birth, can only be seen by the daughter
2. They are the same age
3. They are opposite characters
4. Mom leads daughter to unfamiliar situations
5. It's a comedy - drama
An additional element would be whether mom have lived the life she wanted or she was shy too and hoped her daughter would live the life she always wanted inside her to live but didn't.

A suggestion would be "Mom"

But with the additional element I mentioned, we might understand who is the hero. The mom or the daughter.
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Old 11-13-2018, 06:21 PM   #24
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How about "Mother knows worst"

Got more of that comedy vibe about it...
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