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Old 08-18-2014, 09:27 PM   #1
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Missing-Mystery/Suspense

Hey everyone! I'm proud to show you my first attempt at a short film.
So please check it out! It doesn't have an ending.
I know, I know, that's a very important but I hated how the end came out.
I want to show off all the other hard work I put into it though!



https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pQb0TOaCGfM

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Man, that was well shot. But, I'm not entirely sure what the point of it was. Might want to storyarch it some how.
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The direct link:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pQb0TOaCGfM

Agree with poster above. Lots of potential, nicely done.
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Man, that was well shot. But, I'm not entirely sure what the point of it was. Might want to storyarch it some how.
Hey thank you! Yeah, I know its weird without an end leaves you with like WTF haha.




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The direct link:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pQb0TOaCGfM

Agree with poster above. Lots of potential, nicely done.
Thank you Maybe one day I'll re shoot it with actually actors to get what I was looking for. Thanks for the link too
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