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Old 08-19-2014, 03:32 PM   #1
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nice to meet you (silent film / short)

Hi all,

I want to show you my second silent film, done in 2013. It's about 10min long:



I would appreciate your feedback very much!
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Personally, I think this would have been much better with dialogue.

It's hard to pull off a silent film - the context and story have to be just right and relevant for it being silent. For me, you missed the mark there.

Audio is a tough art to master but well worth the effort.

Regardless, well done on completing your short.

The direct link:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EON-ZII9nKA
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