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Old 08-01-2016, 05:41 AM   #1
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Post Feature script feedback?

"High Tech" science-fiction/drama (89 pages).

LOGLINE: "James, a stoner robot doesn’t want to go to his best friend’s wedding alone, and so begins to date a rebellious woman. However, it isn’t long until he begins to question if their relationship is as artificial as he is."

This is latest in a series of revisions, this version has some major structure changes specifically in act one.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/o0mwbgid21...0Copy.pdf?dl=0

Welcome all feedback. Thanks!

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After reading the first 10 pages, this has really caught my interest. I'm not really into science fiction but nice writing. Potential film perhaps?
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