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Old 04-21-2016, 07:18 PM   #1
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NEED FEEDBACK ON CHINA-HOLLYWOOD CO-PRODUCTION

Hello,

I am developing an action-crime-thriller that will be shot in South Korea. Id like to get feedback.

Below is a video pitch for the script.

Thanks!

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KFF

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Old 04-22-2016, 02:16 AM   #2
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Tell me more about Dragonhunter. And who is this mysterious female protagonist?

I must know more!
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Old 04-22-2016, 04:41 AM   #3
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Hello Caryn. Do you want feedback to find more motivation or are you looking for solutions? People sometimes post things here and then never say another word. Your concept looks solid and good, but it's not there yet. Looks like I could have your last missing piece.
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Thanks for your nice comment. I'm looking for feedback on the script. What is your missing piece? Best,
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Old 04-27-2016, 04:15 PM   #5
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Would you post a copy of the screenplay to this website?

That is the best way for me personally to give any helpful feedback.
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Old 04-28-2016, 09:41 AM   #6
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I was so interested in your post as I love South Korean movies. Unfortunately Vimeo doesn't play well on my laptop and it keeps stopping so I didn't get very far in watching it. What I did notice was that you didn't look at the camera consistently - I think you must.

Wishing you great success!
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