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Old 01-13-2017, 01:53 PM   #1
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Advanced intercut

Hello, I have an intercut of 2 places, then after some lines a third place comes and now the intercut continues with all the 3 places. How I write it?

example:

John and Tom are talking to the phone.

INTERCUT BETWEEN: JOHN AND TOM


JOHN
......
TOM
......

Mark gets in to the phone line and now they talk all to eachother.

INTERCUT BETWEEN: JOHN, TOM AND MARK


MARK
......
TOM
......
JOHN
......


Is the above correct or I should write Tom to the first intercut before he enters the conversation? All characters are introduced before many pages.
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http://scribemeetsworld.com/2013/scr...e-call-scenes/

If you are doing it with phone calls, some good examples here.
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Old 01-13-2017, 02:24 PM   #3
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Actually it is about a war in a big field. One team is at the ground, the other on a high building. After some lines the down team splits in 2. I'll see your link thanks!
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