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watch Lilly's Gift (My First Short Film)

Okay guys this is my first ever post on these forums. Here is my first attempt at something serious, I am only a beginner filmmaker age 17. This is just something I enjoy doing for fun.

The story is about a boy and a girl named Sam and Lilly. Sam comes over to Lilly's house to learn how to play the piano, and Lilly decides its now or never to reveal her true feelings for him.

Sorry for the mediocre acting, they are not professionals.

Anyways please tell me what you think of the feature and as well as what I could improve upon.

Thank you in advance, please be kind. :)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ymgihtTaEjE
 
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