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not bad - but there are a few places where improvement can be made:

-the reflection of his glasses shows the camera, which kinda takes away from the "intimate" mood
-the first shot after the beat starts should be the "best" shot in your showcase. the one you have now shows ugly outlets on the wall and the top of his head is awkwardly cut off
-there is a pretty strong green cast over his facial skin, something that should have been addressed during shooting or at least in post
-i wouldn't really consider this a showcase of your work because it only showcases one project



i hope that wasn't too harsh - just being honest!
i do enjoy the suspended cloud/smoke (cloud tank?) effect you have on the blank wall near the end, i found myself wanting it to go on longer though.
 
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