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Are You The Cliche Of An Aspiring Screenwriter? Follow These 5 Steps So You're Not.

Are you an “aspiring screenwriter” but not really making the right steps to make it as a "professional screenwriter."
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If so, we’ve also put together 5 ways to avoid this. 5 ways you can start to slowly make the transition. Starting today!*

1. Make The Commitment

The biggest obstacle to aspiring screenwriters becoming paid writers is a lack of commitment.

Once you make the commitment to be a writer, everything else falls into place.*If you’re still working that 9 - 5, coming home from work and watching TV rather than writing, you haven’t made the commitment.*

If you’re still living in St. Louis because your on-off boy / girlfriend lives there, rather than move to LA, you haven’t made the commitment.*

Michael Arndt was working as an assistant to Mathew Broderick when he made the commitment to be a screenwriter.*He decided that if he was going to ever become a screenwriter, he was going to have to make some changes to his life first.

So he saved up a substantial amount of money and quit his job.*Then he gave himself one year to just sit down and write. Every day for as many hours as possible.

One year later, he had finished six scripts, one of which was called Little Miss Sunshine.

Below is a list of the four best ways you could change your life to refocus it on screenwriting:*

Quit Your Day Job

If you’re young and without any big time commitments, save up some money and spend all day writing. Give yourself a set amount of time. You can always get another job afterwards.

Or move back in with your parents and write. If this is what you really want to do and you’re in your 20’s or 30’s with no real commitment to anything else, just do it. Or you may look back and regret it.*

Take An MFA In Screenwriting

Enroll on a screenwriting degree and completely immerse yourself for two or three whole years in the world of writing.

This is a very good step, but also out of reach financially to many people. If you can afford it, though, great. Go for it.*A cheaper option, of course, is to take a part time screenwriting course.
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Move to LA*

As our new reader, David DeGrow Shotwell points out in his post on how he broke into Hollywood, moving to LA is probably the single best thing you could do to further your career.

This is where it’s all happening and you’ll feel inspired just being here. Plus, you’re much more likely to meet people in the industry who can help.

Again, if you’re young enough, another option is to actually get a job in the industry as an assistant or intern.*
Okay, you’ll be working like a dog for five days a week and not feel like writing when you get home, but you’ll also be in exactly the right place to give your scripts to important people for them to take a look at.

Now, we realize that not everyone can make these kind of decisions, but even if you’re a stay at home mom of four, or have some kind of hot shot job, you can still make a commitment to screenwriting.*

Finding the time is not impossible. All it takes is some creative planning.*Without a commitment to screenwriting, it’s just that much harder than it already is to get anywhere in this crazy business.*

2. Set Goals*

Once you’ve made the decision to actively pursue a career in scriptwriting, we strongly suggest you whip up some goals for the year.*Firstly, start big. What’s your overall goal for the year? Where do you want to be with your writing twelve months from now?*

Write them down — an overall career goal, monthly goals and day-to-day goals. It’ll help give a sense of structure to your writing so you’re not just cranking out material “blind.”

Be specific. Aim to have written a certain amount of screenplays. Compiled a database of agents and managers. Sent out X number of query letters etc.
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A good way to help focus your goals is by setting yourself deadlines. You can use competitions as deadlines. Or book an appointment with a script doctor in X number of months.*

Give yourself day-to-day goals too. Some writers love setting themselves word and page counts while others just write until they drop. Whatever works for you, use it. And stick to it.*

There are no rules regarding daily goals. The most important thing is that you don’t go more than one day without writing.

3. Master the Craft

We all know the best way to improve as a writer is by actually writing every day. But there are other things you should incorporate into your routine besides writing if you want to master the craft.*

Read Screenwriting Books

There are certain screenwriting books for which it should be a federal crime for an aspiring screenwriter not to have read, such as “Save the Cat”* by Blake Snyder, or our own “Master Screenplay Sequences.” (Just kidding.)

Some writers, such as Craig Mazin, scoff at the idea of reading books to help master the craft of screenwriting. They say “Don’t bother with books, just watch movies. And read scripts.”*

While there is obviously value in watching movies and reading scripts, what is the harm in reading a few books as
well? It’s like saying “The best way to become an architect is by watching other architects build houses and poring over building plans.”*

Okay… but if that aspiring architect then goes home at night with a copy of “Towards a New Architecture” by Le Corbusier, that’s somehow not helping?*

Don’t listen to Craig Mazin. Make a big list of screenwriting books you want to read and cross them off as you go.*

Read Screenplays

Craig Mazin and co. are right about reading scripts though. This is by far the most important thing aspiring screenwriters should do outside of writing.*

You should be reading at least one professional script a week. Otherwise you’re just attempting to do something without really mastering the craft from those who do it best.

Immerse yourself in professionally written scripts and you’ll learn a ton about characterization, structure, how to write a scene and writing style. *

Most importantly you’ll learn how to create emotion in the reader from using only words on a page. This is what screenwriters live by, and there's no better way than learning from those who obviously know how to do it.*

And read bad scripts too. You should be offering to read the script of every screenwriter you meet. You’ll probably learn just as much from these as the professional ones. You’ll learn what not to do pretty fast, and that’ll help you no end in your own writing.*

Write Outlines

The days of just sitting down to watch a movie are over. If you’re an aspiring screenwriter and serious about breaking into the business you need to be writing outlines of films as you watch them.*

This is a great exercise, primarily in helping understand and master structure, but also helps with character and scenes as well.*

So, here’s what you do:

Simply sit down with a laptop and write exactly what happens on screen as you watch.*Each scene in a film fulfills a specific function, and it is this that you need to capture in your summary.*

Sentences should be short and to-the-point, describing only the basics of what happens and avoiding extraneous details.*

It’s a good idea to start with a location, as in “Outside the gas station” to set up the scene. Then, only the major beats need writing down.

So you should never say how someone’s dressed, for example, unless it’s important.*

At the end of the movie you should end up with a four to six page long outline. The next step is to break this down into its relevant acts and sequences. And that’s it.*

Write as many outlines as you can, but it’s probably best to stick to your chosen genre at first. By breaking down dozens of movies into outlines you’ll really get a sense of how your genre works.*

File it away. Build a database of outlines and you’ll also have a great reference point for when you’re writing your own screenplays.*

4 Don’t Send Out Your Script Until It’s Ready*

This is probably the single biggest mistake aspiring screenwriters make. Save yourself a ton of money, heartache and rejection by only sending out your screenplay when you’re sure it’s good enough.*

How do you know when it’s good enough? When you’ve sent it off to an unbiased professional screenplay consultant like ourselves for notes and got at least a “Consider” but preferably a “Recommend” on it.*

If you send your script off to a consultant or receive notes back from someone in the industry and get a “Pass” you know you need to work some more on your craft before approaching agents, managers, producers or even sending it off to competitions.

Once you’ve got one solid script that’s received favorable feedback from a working professional, you’re going to need to repeat the process with at least two more scripts.*

Never go out into the industry claiming you’re a screenwriter “with a great script” unless you have at least two other great scripts sitting on your laptop as well. People in the industry want to discover great writers, not great scripts.*

They want to see that you’re in this screenwriting thing for the long term and not living a 90’s fantasy of selling a million dollar one-off spec.*

Aim to create a portfolio showcasing your best work. We advise sticking to one genre so people know how to place you in the industry. Positioning yourself as a Thriller Guy, or a Comedy Girl is much more beneficial than as a jack-of-all-trades with a Thriller, a Comedy, a Horror and a Reality TV show.

Most importantly, though, don’t send out a terrible screenplay into the industry.

Hollywood agencies and production companies log the scripts they receive and so by sending something to them you’re leaving a permanent reference point for them to be able to look you up as a writer and see what you’ve already submitted. And that’s not good if it’s a script in which nothing happens until page 59.*

5. Once You’re Ready, Market That Script To Death*

Many aspiring screenwriters have done much of the above. They’ve made the commitment to write. They’ve mastered the craft of screenwriting and finished eight or nine scripts. They’ve even received positive feedback on them.*

But then they’ve just entered a few contests. Shown it to a friend of a friend who works at CAA. Maybe joined The Blacklist promotion service. And that’s it…*

Well, this may work if you’re lucky, but chances are it won’t be enough. In order to give yourself the best possible chance of going from aspiring screenwriter to working screenwriter you need to market the hell out of your screenplays and yourself as a writer.*

Now, turning into some kind of Glengarry Glen Ross type sales character is probably not the most natural thing for a screenwriter, but it’s one of the most essential.*

Everyday, writers with half of your writing ability are getting signed by agents, managers and getting their films produced. Not because they’re better writers than you, but because they’re better at selling themselves.*

Once you have a portfolio of work, you need to become just as aggressive in your marketing strategy as the less talented writers who are getting deals.*

This means actually devising a marketing strategy in the first place. Again, you need to write down your goals and organize your contacts. Research all the places you could possibly send a script in your genre. Build up a spreadsheet of possible contacts to approach.

Set goals and cross them off.*Your script may be the next Pulp Fiction, but if you don’t actively get it out there (in the correct manner) who’s going to know about it?*

If you need guidance with all of this, a good place to start is hiring a screenwriting career coach such as Lee Jessup.*

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Well, that’s our five point plan on how to avoid becoming another aspiring screenwriter cliche. We hope it’s provided some inspiration.*Let us know what you think of it.
 
As someone who has done some unorthodox things and literally thrown their life away to be a writer, I suggest doing #1 last, after you've learned to do everything else.
 
U guys funny. "Quit your day job and move to LA"?! C'mon! Looks like LA gives free apartments to people who want to start a screenwriting career :) I guess, even in US, many people work on daily jobs only for 1 purpose - survive. And their apartments costs are probably 60-70% percent of their salary per month. So if they don't work for 3-4 days, they get into overdraft. Or perhaps LA offers high payed jobs for everyone?

My case is even more special. I looked at flight tickets prices from Tel-Aviv to LA and return. Almost 2k$. That's more than I earn per month.
 
Welcome. Interesting ideas, I don't agree with all the subpoints if "professional" means having writing credits, optioned/sold scripts, scripts made into movies/webseries/television, etc. Shelling out a lot of money--getting an MFA, moving to LA, hiring career consultants, entering lots of contests, sending out tons of scripts--is no longer needed to be "professional".

You don't need to move to LA to become a "professional screenwriter". Most people can't afford to quit a 9-5. That's not about commitment but practical survival. Hollywood is largely a closed group at the moment. Networking with local filmmakers is more effective. And that doesn't need to be in LA. Even Blake Snyder had connections in that his father was an Emmy-award winning TV producer. Ms. Jessup's father is a filmmaker. It's connections that make the difference in getting one's foot in the door. There are many avenues for building industry contacts.

Nor do I believe sticking with one genre is particularly useful. A quick scan of industry script requests shows that diversity provides a much better chance of marketing one's materials. While I find that writers who favor a certain genre/medium are more successful, writing across genre/medium is an essential skill in learning the craft of screenwriting. I agree that one shouldn't just write a western because a producer wants a western. An MFA is not necessary.

As a professional, I'm critical of contests and coaching services. Writing coaches may give good advice but can be quite expensive. And there's no guarantee their clients will sell their scripts. I tend to question advice from individuals who have no IMDB credits for writing, direction or production. There is a difference between script review/feedback and coaching. A reviewer will identify what needs to be changed. A coach will work with you to fix it. While a script review may be between $75-$250 depending on the depth and coverage, coaching is often ongoing and can start at $1000 and go up. A writer paying big bucks should expect documented industry experience, credit as a writer/director/producer/showrunner/actor/etc. and industry connections to help market their script(s).

Unfortunately, what is missing from the list is actual involvement on a movie set. Given today's technology--smart phones, tablets, inexpensive DSLR/HD cameras, editing/FX software, youTube/Vimeo, etc.--the writer has greater control by being writer/director/producer. The paradigm continues to change. The difference between "aspiring" and "professional" is the latter actually gets involved in the industry. Writer/directors rather than simply screenwriters are a dominant force. The armchair writer who sends out massive numbers of scripts is playing the same old cliche gambit.

My recommendation to new screenwriters is to be cautious and question if someone holds out a hand for their money. "Aspiring" screenwriters are ripe picking for scams. They should do a careful check on the credentials, look at reviews and complaints, and think twice before parting with their hard earned money. This is not suggesting every offer or service is a scam, but a writer needs to be aware and deserves to get bang for the buck. Attending a workshop with working professional--even if local--will teach a lot. Getting involved on a set even better.

However, sending off scripts to everyone is dangerous! Before sending off your script, check the recipient out. You can look at Preditors & Editors, Absolute Write, and google search on the company for reviews of service. ALWAYS do a search to make sure the agency or agent you plan to send a script to is legitimate. A legitimate literary agent will never charge you a fee to read. Nor will they refer you to an in-house consultant who will work with you for a fee. If they do, it's likely a scam. A key element of marketing is understanding what is and is not appropriate behavior. Not every contest is legit. There are many writers who think that one screenplay is their golden lottery ticket.

Thanks for sharing. Goal setting, skill improvement and learning to market a script are necessary components. Some of the points, though, would seem to target a small group of mobile, single 20-somethings with excessively disposable income. I think being a "professional screenwriter" can be broader than suggested. I agree, overall, that to be a professional screenwriter means to see one's script be optioned/purchased and/or made into a film or series. There are good choices, optional choices and questionable choices that writers need to consider.

Are you an “aspiring screenwriter” but not really making the right steps to make it as a "professional screenwriter." If so, we’ve also put together 5 ways to avoid this. 5 ways you can start to slowly make the transition. Starting today!

1. Make The Commitment
Below is a list of the four best ways you could change your life to refocus it on screenwriting:
- Quit Your Day Job
- Take An MFA In Screenwriting
- Move to LA
... you’re much more likely to meet people in the industry who can help.

If you’re still living in St. Louis because your on-off boy / girlfriend lives there, rather than move to LA, you haven’t made the commitment.

Michael Arndt was working as an assistant to Mathew Broderick ... saved up a substantial amount of money and quit his job ... gave himself one year to just sit down and write. Every day for as many hours as possible. (Mathew must pay very well and be a good reference with contacts!)

Now, we realize that not everyone can make these kind of decisions, but even if you’re a stay at home mom of four, or have some kind of hot shot job, you can still make a commitment to screenwriting. Finding the time is not impossible. All it takes is some creative planning.

2. Set Goals

3. Master the Craft
- Read Screenwriting Books
- Read Screenplays
- Write Outlines


4 Don’t Send Out Your Script Until It’s Ready
- Aim to create a portfolio showcasing your best work. We advise sticking to one genre ... is much more beneficial than as a jack-of-all-trades.
- Most importantly, though, don’t send out a terrible screenplay into the industry.

How do you know when it’s good enough? When you’ve sent it off to an unbiased professional screenplay consultant like ourselves for notes....

5. Once You’re Ready, Market That Script To Death
- ... write down your goals and organize your contacts.
- Research all the places you could possibly send a script in your genre.
- Build up a spreadsheet of possible contacts to approach.

- If you need guidance with all of this, a good place to start is hiring a screenwriting career coach such as ....
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Well, that’s our five point plan on how to avoid becoming another aspiring screenwriter cliche. We hope it’s provided some inspiration.*Let us know what you think of it.
 
It's connections that make the difference in getting one's foot in the door.

With all due respect, I think it's having an outstanding script that gets one's foot in the door.
Having connections can't hurt, but it would be even better if everyone wants a piece of you, not the other way around.

The hard truth is that 99% of people who try to write screenplays will never be in possession of an oustanding script that will break down all doors. In that case, the only other choices are to know people and get your mediocre work optioned that way; start small and work within your local independent community (this is a good idea); or eventually fail and give up.

OP, one doesn't need to move to L.A. unless your approach is to network for the best chance to sell mediocre material that many others are capable of writing. There are many people capable of writing more or less the same stories, that are kind of meh, and in that case, sure, it's who you know. But I say aspire high and try to be in that 1%. Write an outstanding screenplay that nobody else is capable of writing. You can do that from anywhere in the world, but I do agree about the making a commitment part -- at some point, if you want to be a writer, you need to be a writer and not a doctor who writes on the weekends, or a teacher or student who writes in the summer. Just like a professional athlete has to practice every day to become good at their specialized skill, so to does a writer need to write all the time, and devote their life to learning the craft and then putting their ideas down into stories.

But I still stress that anyone should wait on #1 until they learn everything else.
 
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U guys funny. "Quit your day job and move to LA"?! C'mon! Looks like LA gives free apartments to people who want to start a screenwriting career :) I guess, even in US, many people work on daily jobs only for 1 purpose - survive. And their apartments costs are probably 60-70% percent of their salary per month. So if they don't work for 3-4 days, they get into overdraft. Or perhaps LA offers high payed jobs for everyone?

My case is even more special. I looked at flight tickets prices from Tel-Aviv to LA and return. Almost 2k$. That's more than I earn per month.

As we say "if you're young, with no real commitments..." and you want to make it as a screenwriter... I guess we should have also put "and already living in the states" as moving here from abroad is a nightmare.
 
With all due respect, I think it's having an outstanding script that gets one's foot in the door. Having connections can't hurt, but it would be even better if everyone wants a piece of you, not the other way around.
In a perfect world, that would be true. However, I've read outstanding scripts that go nowhere. Even award winning scripts which go unproduced. I've also seen mediocre scripts that, due to connections, were made into feature films. I wish it were the case that scripts were evaluated totally on the merit of an idea, but I'd have to lie to new writers telling them that an outstanding script is all it takes. It's giving them a mistaken notion. No one wants to invest significant money in a no name, no credit writer. There are NO big name Hollywood writers who are without (1) earlier smaller writing credits and/or (2) industry connections. Please don't say, Diablo Cody without reading her biography. She had significant writing experience and a manager PRIOR to "Juno". Blake Snyder's "Stop! or My Mom will Shoot!", his first sold feature that resulted in a bidding war, received horrible reviews (4% on Rotten Tomatoes). Is that the 'outstanding script' that everyone wants a piece of? Yet everyone is eager for his advice.

The hard truth is that 99% of people who try to write screenplays will never be in possession of an oustanding script that will break down all doors. In that case, the only other choices are to know people and get your mediocre work optioned that way; start small and work within your local independent community (this is a good idea); or eventually fail and give up.
Again, you're suggesting a "golden lottery ticket" script. A lot of outstanding stories are made outside of Hollywood. Just as a lot of crap is made in Hollywood. All those "outstanding (Hollywood) scripts" are marketed by WGA writers, writer/directors or industry insiders with agents. A sad but true fact. Again, the definition of 'professional' is at the heart of the issue.

Is it 'professional' if you get 'story by' credit as opposed to 'screenplay by' credit? What if you're paid to ghostwrite/script doctor with no screen credit? Is that professional? Or is it the writer's other industry credits and contacts? Getting to 'professional' (being paid to write) requires continuous, progressive steps. This means setting goals and pursuing them. Break down which doors? whose doors exactly? Do we define 'outstanding' by the final box office product profits which is more due to the actors, director and producer than the original spec script, which is often different from the shooting script? Certainly "Reservoir Dogs" by Tarantino was mediocre at its original $30K budget until Harvey Keitel managed to secure an additional million dollars. Stallone's script for "Rocky" was looked at by UA and finally approved by the producers. Of course, he knew them and had been an actor with credits in nine films before that. Does making over a million dollars make the script 'outstanding'? It's not so much about breaking down doors as much as being invited in. Blake Snyder is widely respected for having sold 15 specs, only 2 were ever made into films for which he has credit. One of which he's also the executive producer. The other had the low ratings. Robert McKee only has 5 writing credits, most of them television episodes. 'Outstanding' is a very relative term.

I agree that a solid script is needed. However, getting a script made into a movie (or episode) isn't just about quality but also connections and resources. To that end, commitment is needed. Indeed, television writing is a way for new writers to break in as evidenced by Blake and McKee. I like television writing as it forces a writer to be more disciplined. A writer who avoids getting involved in the industry, thinking it is only about the quality of a script, exponentially increases the time it takes to be successful. It's no wonder they give up.

The advantage of the MFA is that it forces a student to be involved with the industry and creates contacts. The advantage of LA is that there are opportunities for involvement and contacts. However, those advantages can also be found locally if a writer chooses to. That's where commitment comes into play.
 
Thanks, ScriptReaderPro! Lots of food for thought. Much appreciated.

Thank you, FantasySciFi. You continue to be one of I.T.'s greatest treasures.

I guess I am a cliché. There's no way in hell, I think, that I'm moving to L.A.

But there is hope. Stephen King is actually one of the most produced writers in the world. Right? Does he live in L.A? No. Granted, he's not really a screenwriter. But still.

As well, I'll probably never tire of reminding people that this is Indietalk.com, not Hollywoodtalk.com.
 
FantasySciFi, I think we agree on a lot of points, and you'll see that I recommend that most new writers should start small and work through their local indie community. That's a solid approach.

But if we're talking Hollywood, I think my point stands and we disagree over what exactly it takes to have an outstanding script. In my opinion, simply selling a script or getting it optioned does not equal outstanding. It might be ... but it also might be just professionally proficient (nothing wrong with that and no small task) ... or it might also mean crap on a stick with names attached.

What pile do we want our screenplay to be thrown into?

1. outstanding ... so good that investors and filmmakers are beating down our door to get involved
2. professional ... more than gets the job done
3. marginally acceptable ... has some flourishes but "needs work"
3. crap on a stick with names attached
4. crap on a stick with no names attached

etc. etc.

Now, I really do think this comes down to supply and demand.

Every year, there is a demand for "x" number of quality screenplays that could be made into films. Despite "x" being a very, very small number in proportion to the tens of thousands of screenplays written each year, that quota for "x" never, never gets filled by only scripts from pile #1. Not because they get missed, or the writers don't have enough connections or credentials ... the quota never gets filled solely by pile #1 scripts because there aren't enough truly outstanding screenplays to fill it.

Put yourself in the position of investors and filmmakers. Whatever genre they like or feel comfortable with, they want the very best material they can get their hands on. If Mr. ScreenwriterAMC has sold 15 screenplays in his time, but your script is so good that it's better than Mr. ScreenwriterAMC's latest, then investors and filmmakers are going to make the smart decision -- they are going to choose your screenplay. But if your script could be written by any number of Mr. ScreenwriterAMCs that have credits to their name ... investors and filmmakers are also going to make the smart decision -- they are going to choose the professional guys who are just as good as you if not better, and who have a proven track record.

So what we get is the following:

*Get your script into pile #1.
Make your script so damn good that investors and filmmakers want their hands on it above all others.
There are so few of these written each year, that all or virtually all of them will get noticed.

*Otherwise, the rest of Hollywood's quota gets filled by scripts from piles #2 and #4 and the like.
To be sure, it's no small task to write a compelling, professional screenplay that could legitimately sell and be turned into a profitable film; nor is it a small task to attach names to an otherwise irredeemable work. But the truth is that, despite the small number of people capable of getting their screenplays into these piles ... there are still more scripts in these piles than are needed to fill out the rest of Hollywood's quota each year.

So that's the thing to keep in mind ... even if you work your butt off and finally complete a script that is good enough to sell, there are still more than enough scripts floating around out there that are also good enough to sell. What makes yours stand out against someone who has a proven track record? What makes yours stand out against someone who knows such and such producer/directors/actors etc.?

Or you could just write a screenplay that is better than all of those professionally competent ones that are floating around out there. JMO
 
I like to play golf so I'll just wrap my point up with this analogy.

Let's say you wake up one morning and you decide you want to become a professional golfer. Good luck, buddy.
Nevertheless, you are persistent and pursue your goal to become a professional golfer. What do you need?

1. talent
2. years of hard work and practice

Even then, if through talent and years of hard work, you manage to get your PGA Tour card,
you will probably be the guy finishing around 60th place every week for min cashes.

You can absolutely make a living doing that -- a living much better than most people in this world make,
and presumably doing something you love and enjoy.

But being an uncredited screenwriter who doesn't know anybody is harder -- you can't be that guy finishing in 60th place every week.
Even if you have the talent and put in years of hard work and finally reach a professional level, you can't be that guy in 60th place.

You have to be one of the guys winning tournaments. If you are only finishing in 60th place, you probably don't have as many credentials as the guys in 59th and 61st place.
You probably don't know as many people in the biz as the guys in 58th and 62nd place. In short, you are f$%ked.

But if you can write a script that is near the top of the leaderboard, doesn't matter who you know or who you are -- you're gonna be a star, baby.
 
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