Hard to tell when you're really finished, I guess, but I'm not really sure how to improve it at this point. so I'm just gonna post it around now and see what people think.
but yeah, anyway, I'm 19 and this is my first feature-length script at 93 pages (cut down from around 150). The concepts that went into this project have been percolating in my mind since 2011 so it's been a great feeling to finally get it out of my system.
I posted a few pages of this script earlier this year (on another account which I can't remember the username of), so some of you might recognize a couple scenes.
feel free to just read the first few pages or skip around if you'd like: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1BPvfQ8LmxYcJnMQSBwYoOoiv26tnzjqN/view?usp=sharing
To be honest, the script is so aggressively esoteric and nontraditional that it might be complete drivel. I really can't tell at this point, so any feedback would be much appreciated.
but yeah, anyway, I'm 19 and this is my first feature-length script at 93 pages (cut down from around 150). The concepts that went into this project have been percolating in my mind since 2011 so it's been a great feeling to finally get it out of my system.
I posted a few pages of this script earlier this year (on another account which I can't remember the username of), so some of you might recognize a couple scenes.
feel free to just read the first few pages or skip around if you'd like: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1BPvfQ8LmxYcJnMQSBwYoOoiv26tnzjqN/view?usp=sharing
To be honest, the script is so aggressively esoteric and nontraditional that it might be complete drivel. I really can't tell at this point, so any feedback would be much appreciated.
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