I've completed my first screenplay, after awhile of reading these forums, I thought I would like you guys to critique it. I already registered it with a screenplay holding website, so I might as well leave a link.
http://jonesthepirate.com/Movie.htm
Please be brutal and honest, if you hate it, then please tell me. But do not judge the first couple of pages. Everyone is not like Brian. And, the everything, should, come together at the end. So if you have any questions, please read it to the end, then ask.
http://jonesthepirate.com/Movie.htm
Please be brutal and honest, if you hate it, then please tell me. But do not judge the first couple of pages. Everyone is not like Brian. And, the everything, should, come together at the end. So if you have any questions, please read it to the end, then ask.