script critique

bird · Sep 23, 2004

Would anyone be interested in critiquing the first 50 pages of my script?

bird · Dec 29, 2004

Thanks Tom!

Emailed ya...

bird · Jan 9, 2005

Tom,

Thanks for the priceless feedback on my work! I'm constantly amazed at how another set of 'eyes' can bring such fresh insight into a script (and make it better).

Bird

T Shipley · Jan 9, 2005

bird said:
Tom,

Thanks for the priceless feedback on my work! I'm constantly amazed at how another set of 'eyes' can bring such fresh insight into a script (and make it better).

Bird

It was my pleasure. Thanks for returning the favor.

Phil D · Jan 9, 2005

Hey Bird,

I'd really like to take a look as well, if it's not to late!

bird · Jan 9, 2005

Thanks Phil,

Naw, it's a work-in-progress, so it's never too late

. I'm emailing it to ya. I appreciate it very much!

Bird

Nique Zoolio · Jan 9, 2005

I'd would enjoy a read during the cold of February, so
by all means send it on to me via e-mail,
i can send you a critique in February,
and whilst your sex may be made clear to members of the foum,
i am unable to have an avator, and thus, appear almost asexual, i feel anyway.....
anyways got a bit off tangent,
but send it to me,
and i'll e-mail you thoughts back in February,
hopefully you may be able to do the same for me with my first short script in February.
take care,
zoolio

bird · Jan 10, 2005

First, let me extend a :welcome:

and a

to you Nique Zoolio! You'll find the members here a great bunch of people. Your post is hilarious!

Thanks for asking to read my work...it's about 65 pages of something that will be way overlong (yikes).

Yes, certainly, I'd love to read your script and return the favor of a critique.

I'll email it.

Bird