Hello guys,
Could I have your opinions on this, please?
"After being accidently involved in his girlfriend – a known youtuber – death because of a cockroach, young Ethan tries to find his happiness, while at the same time he deals with the antics of his workplace, a (really) late night live call-in tv show production."
Ok I'll try to explain how the death happens and why I wrote that logline (since I'm not native English, sorry for any mistake):
So basically she is a known youtuber and she's doing a live video where she answers to some of his fans questions. One of the fans asks for her to try again the only position she failed in her last challenge with her boyfriend (Ethan). The challenge consisted in trying to mimic acrobatic positions like this:
http://yogachicago.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/02/Yoga-pose-2-236x300.jpg
So then he comes next to her and they both try to get it right this time. Ethan is underneath, supporting her weight. But then a cockroach approaches his face, he screams, moves his body abruptly, she falls and breaks her neck. So that's how she dies. Actually, I'm still trying to figure if she was his girlfirend or one of his best friends, but girlfriends seems a better choice.
My idea is that the story begins like 1 year after that, he got that call tv job after that situation.
The death scene will only be shown in the end of the 1st episode, after one girl he's been dating knocks on his door and tell him she doesn't want to see him anymore, because she founds out that he was the one who "killed" that known youtuber.
Does that make sense?
Thank you!
Could I have your opinions on this, please?
"After being accidently involved in his girlfriend – a known youtuber – death because of a cockroach, young Ethan tries to find his happiness, while at the same time he deals with the antics of his workplace, a (really) late night live call-in tv show production."
Ok I'll try to explain how the death happens and why I wrote that logline (since I'm not native English, sorry for any mistake):
So basically she is a known youtuber and she's doing a live video where she answers to some of his fans questions. One of the fans asks for her to try again the only position she failed in her last challenge with her boyfriend (Ethan). The challenge consisted in trying to mimic acrobatic positions like this:
http://yogachicago.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/02/Yoga-pose-2-236x300.jpg
So then he comes next to her and they both try to get it right this time. Ethan is underneath, supporting her weight. But then a cockroach approaches his face, he screams, moves his body abruptly, she falls and breaks her neck. So that's how she dies. Actually, I'm still trying to figure if she was his girlfirend or one of his best friends, but girlfriends seems a better choice.
My idea is that the story begins like 1 year after that, he got that call tv job after that situation.
The death scene will only be shown in the end of the 1st episode, after one girl he's been dating knocks on his door and tell him she doesn't want to see him anymore, because she founds out that he was the one who "killed" that known youtuber.
Does that make sense?
Thank you!
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