In my script, the main cop character decides to pursue an investigation on his own, off the books, and he decides to tail a suspect and keep surveillance on him, hoping to find a lead, or hoping he will incriminate himself, and give them evidence.
Basically the cop figures out who the suspect likely is, in one scene. Then the next scene I have written is him tailing the suspect, and the suspect goes to a place and does something to incriminate himself and gives him a lead. From there he follows up on the lead, and the rest of the plot goes on. This is what I need to link the suspect and the lead together for the protagonist to discover.
However, it seems to convenient that in the first scene, the cop comes up with a suspect, then in the next scene, he is tailing him, and the suspect ends up giving him a lead. It just seems too convenient that he got what he needed so quickly. So I should probably write it so that the cop was following him around for quite some time, but I do not want to write a few scenes of him doing that, cause that is more scenes, and more budget to spend. The cop cannot tell anyone that he has been following the suspect around for days cause he is working outside the law, and cannot tell anyone therefore.
So how do I establish that the cop has been following him around for some time? Or how should I write it so that it's not so convenient?
Basically the cop figures out who the suspect likely is, in one scene. Then the next scene I have written is him tailing the suspect, and the suspect goes to a place and does something to incriminate himself and gives him a lead. From there he follows up on the lead, and the rest of the plot goes on. This is what I need to link the suspect and the lead together for the protagonist to discover.
However, it seems to convenient that in the first scene, the cop comes up with a suspect, then in the next scene, he is tailing him, and the suspect ends up giving him a lead. It just seems too convenient that he got what he needed so quickly. So I should probably write it so that the cop was following him around for quite some time, but I do not want to write a few scenes of him doing that, cause that is more scenes, and more budget to spend. The cop cannot tell anyone that he has been following the suspect around for days cause he is working outside the law, and cannot tell anyone therefore.
So how do I establish that the cop has been following him around for some time? Or how should I write it so that it's not so convenient?
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