Mockumentary idea need advice

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I'm currently writing a script on a mocumentary on health food woos/trends. I'm new to script writing and am trying to make it not fall under a drama documentary type of film. Is there anything in particular that I should include/avoid to make it better? Sorry about the formatting I hope it isn't too hard to read. Thanks

http://freetexthost.com/zq3dy3yvwa
 
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It's your film and do whatever I'm just here to express my hatred for the camera style the show "the office" has. I can not stand that annoying fast zoom they do on the cast. even parks and rec does it along with arrested development. maybe even more shows. I get that they are trying to do a documentary thing I understand it but it's too much.
 
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Health food and such trends are pretty well covered, to the point, where you'll need to get very close to the subject matter. Go on a personal journey, maybe not anywhere foreign and/or exotic- but get into the food. Do something dangerous to get it/make it/consume it. People love drama and food by itself is pretty boring. Tasty but boring.
 
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