Good: Cute simple story, relatable, doable, cool location, I liked the shot selection. And again, simple. I love simplicity in short films. Great music, very fitting.
Bad: Pacing was too slow except for the moment at 1:40 (that falls under the "good" category). I also did not care enough about the guy when the woman stopped responding, he didn't seem disappointed or react in a way in which made me sympathize more. Finally, the last action where they turn toward each other was too drawn out and a bit cheesy for me.
Ugly: Color it, and make sure each shot matches, there were a few that seemed darker or lighter. It looked unspectacular when it could've looked better. Find something that matches the tone.
Overall, good work! The good thing is that almost everything I thought didn't work can easily be fixed by another editing sesh. Or ignore my, those are just my opinions!
3/5 nicely done!