What is this?
To be perfectly honest, I don't know what's going on here. Is that supposed to be the WTC? An alternate history version of 9/11, where the airplane is caught by some sort of tentacle before it hits the tower?
I don't know what kind of feedback you're after...
The rough drawings are, obviously, pretty crude. But that could be fine if it's the style you're going for and you use it consistently. If it is the twin towers, you're scale is very wrong. But, again, if that's something to do with the style, then cool. The fact that there's literally nothing else in the scene is a bit odd. Where are the other building? How about some clouds in the sky?