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watch Franklin - Short Film I Made Last Year
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Pretty good acting from those kids!
Agreed! This was very well done. Could have maybe used some color correction, but then again, California skies are pretty grey.
Conceptually, this was great! I won't give anything away. So glad that I found this from watching your more recent short, NEUROXICA
It was indeed.
Good camera-work too - must have been fun shooting backwards, low to the ground while running away from a child across rough terrain! 
Really nice to see a drama that depends entirely on the narrative and good camera angles/good editing for its effect.Not sure if the choice and "hair&makeup" of the actor playing Franklin was deliberately made to look like Max, but it was very effective. At first, I thought it was Max's projection of himself (which may have been the intention?) ... and then wondered if there'd be a twist where an uninjured Franklin took the place of a dead Max. But I preferred the way it turned out, and that last line perfectly captured a child's perspective on the world!
Very nice indeed.
As an audio post type I would have done a few more things, made some different choices, mixed a bit differently, but that's mostly a matter of taste.
Well done.
As an audio post type I would have done a few more things, made some different choices, mixed a bit differently, but that's mostly a matter of taste.
Well done.