watch Short Film 'Salvation' for Gein's Family Gift Shop

Hi Guys,

I'm posting something else. If anyone wants to give feedback I'd be most grateful.

Everything I've posted up has been with me as a 1 man crew.

I'm still learning, so any thoughts, positive or critical are appreciated.

'At the end of all days, a young woman is praying for salvation. When it arrives, how will she react?'

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kAi0Y7PhMpc

That was decent. Issue with the actress' final delivery at the end. Needed to be a stronger punchline, just a bit more to give it a lift.

Hi, hadn't realised there was a reply here. Sorry for my late reply.

Agreed. This was added on the day. Plus the camera was about to die (battery charger wouldn't charge) and it was the last shot of the day.

Thanks for the feedback though.