watch NeoDimension - Adventure on a machine planet

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SirRandom

• Aug 10, 2013

• #1

Hello there! We just recently finished our narrative animation / live action mashup. This is the first story-driven film published by Rayhouse Productions. I did all the visuals by myself, and spent over three months on the project. It was an interesting process and you can check my making of video blog about it on our YouTube channel!

Enjoy!


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WgaLQf3E3qI

PS: The film has subtitles in finnish, if there happens to be some of you finnish speaking people around!

 

Last edited: Aug 11, 2013

bioboy98

• Oct 13, 2013

• #2

Well the graphics were good. Needed some work mixing with other graphics. The voice was terrible, I'm sorry but I did not like the monotone tough guy. Also I didn't like the random chances that happened with everything. For instance when he happens to walk into a room, then happens to see a card, and happens to watch it. But your on a good track. You've got the graphics down pretty good. You just need some tweaking on the plot. Good Job!

 

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SirRandom

• Dec 11, 2013

• #3

Thank you so much for your feedback!

NeoDimension has had a bit of a mixed reception. Some have praised its audio and sound acting, and others have said that the graphics were good and the technique was interesting.

I do agree, that the acting could be better. If we do a project like this in the future, it would be better to act all the parts live and then do the animation and backgrounds to that. In this one, they were done off-sync, which makes it partially confusing.

 

MissingProductions

• Dec 12, 2013

• #4

I liked the artwork.

The voice and tone of the main guy reminds me of Max Payne.

 

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SirRandom

• Dec 21, 2013

• #5

Thanks!

I recall my original inspiration was the Tychus Findlay character from StarCraft II. But, I guess there's a little bit of Max Payne in there too. This animation and those games are both finnish pieces of art after all