I need $ and I expect to see result before finishing...
Then you're gonna be stuck in a state of expectation forever.
Dude, you haven't done a damn thing to prove yourself as a capable screenwriter, yet you seem to think that some major Hollywood bigwig is suddenly going to show up and throw money at you based on disorganized thoughts. What the... ?
Look at your rather confusing obsession with Spielberg. In one post, you boldly proclaim that you are working on a screenplay idea that you seem to think he's going to read personally. In another post you lambast him for not making great films anymore. Now, the liklihood that he would be reading posts on this forum is pretty slim, but still you're making contradictory posts and that's the stuff that can bite you in the ass later.
If you want to write for American filmmakers, you need to learn fluent English. Period. If you spent half as much time focusing on that (using one of many online language learning systems) as you do posting about Speilberg or asking if anyone would "rate" your disorganized ramblings, you'd be there already.
Then, learn to write a screenlplay in proper format.
Once you've done those two things, you're gonna end up writing several scripts before you see even modest results from one.
Don't waste your money trying to move to the States. If you start to find success AFTER you've been writing completed, fluent screenplays, and it makes career sense, then do it. But that's a long way off. You're gonna need to maintain income from a separate job to keep you afloat whie you do all this. That's just the way it goes.