Hello, guys,
So I have taken my first stab at writing a horror script and, as stated above, written about 31 pages and I have expanded on the story to some extent and have tried to the best of my ability to establish some initial scares.
Thing is, I am kind of new to this script thing, so in addition to commenting on the story, atmosphere, characters, etc., it would be great if I could get some tips and guidelines on how to develop better sluglines, as I've had some difficulty writing them, so if you feel that the sluglines are terrible, instead of just indicating as such in your comment, some suggestions would be greatly appreciated.
Logline: Four researchers are sent to an island believed to be the origin of a microbe that has caused an epidemic, only to crash land and unveil the presence of a psychotic geneticist who aims to rewrite the fabric of human civilization.
Google Drive Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B56PpALhta-ZS1ZPUmt1LVFaVkk/view?usp=sharing
Thank you, everyone, for the help.
So I have taken my first stab at writing a horror script and, as stated above, written about 31 pages and I have expanded on the story to some extent and have tried to the best of my ability to establish some initial scares.
Thing is, I am kind of new to this script thing, so in addition to commenting on the story, atmosphere, characters, etc., it would be great if I could get some tips and guidelines on how to develop better sluglines, as I've had some difficulty writing them, so if you feel that the sluglines are terrible, instead of just indicating as such in your comment, some suggestions would be greatly appreciated.
Logline: Four researchers are sent to an island believed to be the origin of a microbe that has caused an epidemic, only to crash land and unveil the presence of a psychotic geneticist who aims to rewrite the fabric of human civilization.
Google Drive Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B56PpALhta-ZS1ZPUmt1LVFaVkk/view?usp=sharing
Thank you, everyone, for the help.