watch "ATTENTION FOCUS" Title Sequence in HD.

Hi,

I hope you enjoy this title sequence I made last year, I hope you can give me some feedback to this post and the video itself as it helps me work out what i need to improve on for the next video i make.

HD First cut version: http://vimeo.com/849506

DV First cut: http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=ApgONyDRdIo

DV Second cut: http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=OOhQab5tks8

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Hope you enjoy,

Thanks for reading. James Chegwyn.