watch "I Am Planet" trt-5:24 Abstract Narrative

This is a short I made about 10 months ago. It was shot all on a couple $25 lenses. It got into the Cucalorus Film Festival http://www.cucalorus.org/ )and people seem to like it. I only see flaws in it now but I thought I would post it just for people to see. Any comments are fine
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TkEP44mgMdY

I'm not sure what's going on exactly, but I like the cinematography and underwater shots. Seems really deep, but I couldn't follow the dialogue and watch at the same time- I never did that well in poetry class alas. I'm curious to see what you come up with next.