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watch Inside The Bunker

Lucky Hardwood

Lucky Hardwood

This is the first of four promotional videos for my new web series, Inside The Bunker. This promo features The Girl With The Guns.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nfOvJAb3M6c
 
The composition is great but the sound is very bad. You should get an external microphone as soon as you can! (eg. zoom-h1)
 
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Needs better sound, otherwise seems interesting.
 
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The sound is atrocious. It's excessively roomy, and the "underwater" sounding artifacts (from noise reduction?) make it that much worse.

C'mon Lucky, you've been hearing me preach about getting solid sound for years!!!! WTF happened?

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First impression is the low production value. echoey sound as everyone said, and that cord plugged in on the right makes it feel like lower production value too. bricks are overexposed on the left

Story wise, I'm coming away with little to no idea what your web series is about or who your target market is. Her delivery seemed purposefully unnatural and i'm not sure what to make of it.
 
I know that the audio sucks balls. Premiere Pro (CS5.5) and Final Cut Pro X won't import the video so I can't use either of those. I ended up using iMovie to edit and I was running out of time before I had to be at work so I just used the crappy in camera audio instead of the audio captured with the Sennheiser wireless lav system and DR100 mkII. Once I figure out how to replace audio in iMovie, I will fix the edit and replace it. I made a commitment to begin uploading before the end of the first week in December, so I just went with what I could bodge together. No excuses here, i just wanted to get something uploaded rather than griping about why I haven't. Oddly, the video is doing rather well on Vimeo. As far as who my target market is, see my Web Series Development thread in the PreProduction forum. Thank-you all for your critiques.
 
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