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Old 12-12-2016, 03:51 PM   #1
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4 A.M. short

I made this in my room.

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Cool! It was entertaining to watch although I didn't quite get it I guess. I'm thinking about making a one-man-show myself. Kind of hard to come up with a good plot though. Anyway, good work!


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Wow, that was some interesting use of a laser pen.
It was intriguing to watch.
The timing of the pr0n video was hilarious!

It kept my attention at 3:00 AM.
It's time to sleep now.
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Old 02-01-2017, 06:37 AM   #5
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Thank you, sirs.
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When you posted this I watched about 90 seconds and stopped. Now
that it has been bumped I watched the entire thing. The set up is way
too long for me. But it does pick up and made me want to finish watching.

An excellent example of something cheap and easy to make yet something
to showcase your talent. I liked it.
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Old 02-01-2017, 01:05 PM   #7
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Liked the mood. Liked the lighting. Liked the ambient sound. Liked the editing. Picked up at the end. Was a good experimental short film.
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Old 02-03-2017, 11:21 PM   #8
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When you posted this I watched about 90 seconds and stopped. Now
that it has been bumped I watched the entire thing. The set up is way
too long for me. But it does pick up and made me want to finish watching.

An excellent example of something cheap and easy to make yet something
to showcase your talent. I liked it.
Thanks for giving it a second chance.

It initially started as a light test/music video but the music I made didn't really fit so it turned into some experimental suspense hybrid.
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