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Old 10-31-2017, 05:05 PM   #1
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Caution Dark Web (short film)

Here is my horror short film, "Dark Web". I'd appreciate any feedback I can get on this. Thanks!
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"So how are we going to buy our drugs and automatic weapons now?" A place called America. Just walk down the street. Good video, I like the throat cut vfx too. Not the best but films used to use that technique a long time ago, so you're on the right track.
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You could improve on the acting but nice job overall!
It's cool how all those computers use that one plug
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Good atmosphere. Very good, actually.
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Old 11-07-2017, 04:17 PM   #5
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"So how are we going to buy our drugs and automatic weapons now?" A place called America. Just walk down the street. Good video, I like the throat cut vfx too. Not the best but films used to use that technique a long time ago, so you're on the right track.
Thank you! Very true about the drugs and weapons though!
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Good atmosphere. Very good, actually.
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed!
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