watch The Innocence of War: Short WW2 Film

Now then fellas

This is my first time on this forum. So I thought I'd start out with a bang. Here's a WW2 film I shot back in January.




Let me know what you think

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=03eqsoq37Yg

Cal

Ok, won't spoil it for everyone by revealing the twist

That was pretty good, production wise. There was too much handheld camera at the start it was kind of nauseating. But other than that (and the not-terribly-realistic guns) the production value was high. The problem was the sound and particularly how high the background/explosion sounds were compared with the dialogue. I could make out very little of what they were saying and whilst I am listening to this on my laptop, so are a lot of people who'll be watching the video...

Other than that and a slight lack of historical accuracy, this was pretty good work.

Hiya Cal! I always quite liked this short too - similar thoughts to Nick here

I'm not a fan of all the stuff that was clearly done in After Effects. It looks like cheap CGI. If you can't effectively do it practical, or if you're not a true CGI artist, I say don't do it.

His "radio talk" could use work, and "They shot me!! I'm hit!!" Isn't that the same thing. I enjoyed it.