watch Teaser for my 48GFC Entry "Oh The Irony"

I spent the weekend of May 18-20 shooting and editing a movie for the 48 Hour Guerrilla Film Challenge. What I came out with wasn't exactly what I had hoped, but despite it was still one of the best experiences of my life. They don't allow us to upload the movies publicly because they have a "People's Choice Award" in a couple of weeks, so here's a trailer instead.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Nn_zGGYqcSg

Feel free to viciously tear into my amateur effort, but here are a few things I already know:
1. Horrid lighting
2. Average sound at best (I only have a Zoom H1, and nothing to mount it on my camera with!)
3. Cinematography could use some work

Any more thoughts?

Look like it could be good. Will you be posting the full film online after the 48GFC?

Yeah, they're going to upload it to YouTube for the purposes of a contest to get the most views, and I'll post it then. That will hopefully be before the end of the month...