Can someone review my final footage?

Hey!

I was wondering if someone with an eye for films etc can look at my final footage and say what I can improve.

Please dont say whats bad but what I can improve or make better, so I can actually do something with it.

This is the link

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_KFkeDhD53Q

everything is filmed with a GoPro Hero3 Black edition and edited with Cyberlink Powerdirector 11

Thanks for your review, dont forget to subscribe

TheAwesomeBuilder