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watch My new short film after 2 years , some feedback would be nice
- Thread starter jsaucetv
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The first minute was like an audio book. Quit watching at that point.
The guy was using big words for no real reason. Also the use of "mind set" seemed to me to be out of context to the rest of the sentence so effectively we had a guy babbling words that were not actually used properly.
After that I kind of grew bored.
Also, the lack of attention bothered me in that the guys nice clean trousers suggested he had been homeless for 10 minutes
Sorry.
After that I kind of grew bored.
Also, the lack of attention bothered me in that the guys nice clean trousers suggested he had been homeless for 10 minutes
Sorry.
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Got bored a minute in.
Shorts need to be a bit more exciting.
Shorts need to be a bit more exciting.
I liked it. Very moody and reflective piece. Although there should be some sort of attention grabber at the beginning, and a reason for the audience to keep watching. Some less dialogue, audio clean-up, and perhaps more pleasant color correction (those blues and purples are pushed too far) might help. Flawed but nicely done piece.
Congrats on getting back into filmmaking after 2 years! Keep on improving!
Congrats on getting back into filmmaking after 2 years! Keep on improving!