In normal creative writing i.e. writing a story/novel onomatopoeia/written sound is great. But is it applicable to screenplay writing? I mean what sounds better?:
Ext. Street – day
Kevin looks into the dipping mirror. He sees three cars with blue flashing lights are behind them. Shit! The cops.
or this one:
Ext. street – day
Kevin discerns a deep Woop woop. He looks into the dipping mirror. He recognizes sparsely three cars with blue flashing lights are behind them. Shit! The cops.
Ext. Street – day
Kevin looks into the dipping mirror. He sees three cars with blue flashing lights are behind them. Shit! The cops.
or this one:
Ext. street – day
Kevin discerns a deep Woop woop. He looks into the dipping mirror. He recognizes sparsely three cars with blue flashing lights are behind them. Shit! The cops.