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Old 05-09-2017, 02:01 AM   #1
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Clean Desk - Short Comedy Sketch

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It's been a while, but I'm finally back at it, and making movies again. I just started up my own production title "Warped Mirror Production," and made a short little sketch called "Clean Desk." I'd love it if you could go check it out, and give some feedback. If you're feeling really generous a subscription to my new channel wouldn't hurt.

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Good punchline. I do feel that it dragged on longer than it should've. But more importantly, the lighting could've been WAAAY better
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Thanks for the feedback. After watching it a bunch more times, I definitely see a good 20-30 seconds that I could've cut out, but eh you live and you learn. As far as lighting goes, I know I could have improved it, but was tryin to get this done super quick and didn't have time to pull out the little lighting gear I've got.
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