Seemed to be one long, dreary conversation. Found nothing funny. Maybe its a cultural thing, but it seems little different to all those crappy American unfunny comedies like "Friends". Seems pretty talentless.
Additionally, it is riddled with...
- Missing commas.
- Spelling errors like thru
- People calling each other idiot.
- Lousy layout.
If you want to see comedy writing at its absolute peak, you should go and watch "One Foot In The Grave" Just about every episode is an utter masterclass on screenwriting and comedy writing. It was easily England's top comedy show for years and is utterly, utterly jaw-dropping.
There's 250,000 screenplays dropping through letter boaxes all over Beverly Hills each year with a heavy percentage being just like a rebranded "Friends" Unless you are a studio chief's offspring or you are sleeping wiht the right person, trying to get your own version of "Friends" to be made will be like trying to push a Foden truck up the north side of Mount Everest with a bent spoon.