The screenwriters bible is the only place where I read it's okay to start you're logline with, What if... Just imagine... All others I've read say avoid starting it like that. Just go with, Fate step in. Not, just imagine if fate steps in. And, give a middle begginnig and end to your synopsis. Everyone else says, just a tease. Who's advise should I take. I'm going to lay mind out here.
Fate steps in for a woman battling depression while retuning home from the pharmacist with slipping pills to end it all after she is swept off her feet literally, than emotional by a hopeless romantic who saves her from getting hit by a cab when she avoids a dog walker entangled with their leases and steps into the street without looking. A loving and meaningful relationship transpires. She has second thoughts about cashing it in until she unknowingly hears a loving message left by another woman on the answering machine that was in the apartment when he moved in and never used by him.
Critiquing welcome!
Fate steps in for a woman battling depression while retuning home from the pharmacist with slipping pills to end it all after she is swept off her feet literally, than emotional by a hopeless romantic who saves her from getting hit by a cab when she avoids a dog walker entangled with their leases and steps into the street without looking. A loving and meaningful relationship transpires. She has second thoughts about cashing it in until she unknowingly hears a loving message left by another woman on the answering machine that was in the apartment when he moved in and never used by him.
Critiquing welcome!
