The whole of Egypt mourns his death.
EGYPT
“Let 10,000 men die before our Magnificent PHARAOH!”
INT. KARNAK TEMPLE -DAY - MOMENTS LATER
Karnak Temple, more than two thousand feet in length and one thousand feet in width with living quarters throughout, is slightly smaller than the Pharaohs palace.
Wide paved roads led to the temples made of stone. The immediate entrance was lined with statues, consisting of sphinxes and other religious animals.
Two granite obelisks stand before the front wall which formed two high tower like buildings, called pylons.
Behind the pylons came a large court made of mud bricks where a congregation assembled attending the church service.
The chief entrance to the Temple looked to the east; while the Holy Chambers at the upper end of the landscape approached the Nile.
Hundreds of students sit in the hall of priests receiving instruction.
Following the hall of the priests, hidden at the end of a long dark torch lit path came the final chamber, called the Adyum (ADD-E-UM).
The shrine and the home of the Gods.
The temple guards stand at constant attention.
This is how it looks in my head..is it necessary or would shortening the descriptions help or hurt?
EGYPT
“Let 10,000 men die before our Magnificent PHARAOH!”
INT. KARNAK TEMPLE -DAY - MOMENTS LATER
Karnak Temple, more than two thousand feet in length and one thousand feet in width with living quarters throughout, is slightly smaller than the Pharaohs palace.
Wide paved roads led to the temples made of stone. The immediate entrance was lined with statues, consisting of sphinxes and other religious animals.
Two granite obelisks stand before the front wall which formed two high tower like buildings, called pylons.
Behind the pylons came a large court made of mud bricks where a congregation assembled attending the church service.
The chief entrance to the Temple looked to the east; while the Holy Chambers at the upper end of the landscape approached the Nile.
Hundreds of students sit in the hall of priests receiving instruction.
Following the hall of the priests, hidden at the end of a long dark torch lit path came the final chamber, called the Adyum (ADD-E-UM).
The shrine and the home of the Gods.
The temple guards stand at constant attention.
This is how it looks in my head..is it necessary or would shortening the descriptions help or hurt?