Hello there.
I know you did not ask for opinions on this film, but I find constructive critisism the best way to improve.
I will not comment on the actors as I can see they are young and inexperienced, and over all they're not doing half a bad job, but they can at time be somewhat hard to understand. When doing indie film you need to prioritize sound. Nothing is better to emulate a good production than decent sound. I personally record all scenes that has dialogue with a handheld zoom h1 recorder, but cheaper options are availible. Also try to get the lines shot in between traffic, if not you'll hear the changing car sounds in every cut. That can also be improved by adding some ambient music.
Other than that there is a lot of potential. Your camera work is far from the worst I've witnessed on this page and I'm looking forward to watching nyour next project.