Hey everyone. Glad to have joined the forum.
I've been working on a science fiction screenplay entitled Superhuman for several years now. The screenplay includes some innovative new ideas in terms of its visuals and depiction of action. It's truly a labour of love. Development of the screenplay is on going though is progressing well. I'd love to hear your thoughts and overall impressions on the screenplay's first ten pages.
The first ten pages represent one long action sequence that is the introduction to the screenplay. They have been iterated over and over again over the years though I still believe there is room for improvement. If you could you take the time to read the screenplay sample and post your impressions here that would be greatly appreciated. Positive or negative I'd love to hear your thoughts.
The screenplay sample is available here:
http://www.mediafire.com/view/zn2psnvc3yq7o5d/Superhuman_Start_R147.pdf
Please do post your overall impressions. I look forward to reading your responses.
I've been working on a science fiction screenplay entitled Superhuman for several years now. The screenplay includes some innovative new ideas in terms of its visuals and depiction of action. It's truly a labour of love. Development of the screenplay is on going though is progressing well. I'd love to hear your thoughts and overall impressions on the screenplay's first ten pages.
The first ten pages represent one long action sequence that is the introduction to the screenplay. They have been iterated over and over again over the years though I still believe there is room for improvement. If you could you take the time to read the screenplay sample and post your impressions here that would be greatly appreciated. Positive or negative I'd love to hear your thoughts.
The screenplay sample is available here:
http://www.mediafire.com/view/zn2psnvc3yq7o5d/Superhuman_Start_R147.pdf
Please do post your overall impressions. I look forward to reading your responses.