New in town. -Short Horror-

maz

• Dec 24, 2014

• #2

I really enjoyed that, although if he's keeping his eyes closed how is he able to read the message?

Good job though.

 

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dcarnett

• Dec 24, 2014

• #3

I feel like the creature is always in control. From the moment the story starts- ''IT'' knows where this will end. He wants him to see the message written on the wall.

 

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