Hi y'all,
I've been working on this screenplay for a few months, and I've just sorta stalled. I know how it ends and how it begins, but I can't seem to figure out the second and third acts of the film. I'm beginning to wonder if I should just scrap the entire thing and start over. I really love the concept behind my idea, but I don't know if its working.
So far, my film is about a woman named Harper, who, after being fired from her job and finding her boyfriend in bed with two other women, is forced to move home with her mother, with whom she has a troubled relationship. Upon arriving home, she meets Delilah, a teenage foster kid who lives down the street from her mother. After accepting a teaching assistant job for her former drama teacher, Harper finds herself drawn to the girl, and together they begin to heal the broken parts of their lives.
I've toyed with Harper and Delilah making a film together, or trying to save the environment, or making a documentary, but nothing seems right.
I was wondering if anyone could give me some guidance.
Thanks.
I've been working on this screenplay for a few months, and I've just sorta stalled. I know how it ends and how it begins, but I can't seem to figure out the second and third acts of the film. I'm beginning to wonder if I should just scrap the entire thing and start over. I really love the concept behind my idea, but I don't know if its working.
So far, my film is about a woman named Harper, who, after being fired from her job and finding her boyfriend in bed with two other women, is forced to move home with her mother, with whom she has a troubled relationship. Upon arriving home, she meets Delilah, a teenage foster kid who lives down the street from her mother. After accepting a teaching assistant job for her former drama teacher, Harper finds herself drawn to the girl, and together they begin to heal the broken parts of their lives.
I've toyed with Harper and Delilah making a film together, or trying to save the environment, or making a documentary, but nothing seems right.
I was wondering if anyone could give me some guidance.
Thanks.