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Old 10-12-2018, 06:01 PM   #1
mstasg
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My Last Part Of The Movie!! Is it nice?Have you any idea?

rafael's brother in the beach in a sunny day

he brings cockleshell for his girlfriend collected in his two hands and puts on ground. Then he starts smoking pipe.

brother

You can't give a thanks.

Girlfriend

Maybe..

BROTHER

Maybe what?

GIRLFRIEND

This is not gold or even silver.

BROTHER

It is for you. You could be just thankful. Which girl in our village does get gold or silver?
Of course, I promise that you will get it. I just have a plan you should not know it.

GIRLFRIEND

I don't care about your imaginations.

BROTHER

What? Tell another time?

GIRLFRIEND

You are sick . We are poor, while your father was quiet rich.

BROTHER

Imagination? ha..

GIRLFRIEND

You are so.. I used to it and I don't pay attention anymore. I wanna go home sooner. Take me sooner or I will go myself..

BROTHER

See you tomorrow.

GIRLFRIEND

You mean I go myself?

BROTHER

No, just was kidding..

he picks his hat and they go...
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