This thread came from an idea I had about how to improve pitching a screenplay and I thought, "How about a thread where a sample pitch can be posted and then forum members can dissect the pitch, make suggestions and rewrite it", this way it could become a thread where experimentation can be done and thoughts can be expressed so writers can then take what has been learnt here and put it into practice with their actual screenplays.
Here is my sample pitch to start the ball rolling.
Sample Pitch:
A disabled man who cannot speak or walk struggles to live day to day. But this disabled man isn't as disabled as you may believe. You see, he has this alternate reality he can enter where anything he imagines is possible. But what happens when someone else can enter your alternate reality and become a threat? The disabled man in his alternate reality must find a way to stop an evil entity from destroying that reality, which would then kill the disabled man due to his connection to it. Will the disabled man succeed in stopping this menace or will he lose his life?
A story about courage and the limitless power of the imagination for those who may feel like they are powerless but who have great strength that lies within just waiting to be unleashed.
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Let the workshop begin!
Here is my sample pitch to start the ball rolling.
Sample Pitch:
A disabled man who cannot speak or walk struggles to live day to day. But this disabled man isn't as disabled as you may believe. You see, he has this alternate reality he can enter where anything he imagines is possible. But what happens when someone else can enter your alternate reality and become a threat? The disabled man in his alternate reality must find a way to stop an evil entity from destroying that reality, which would then kill the disabled man due to his connection to it. Will the disabled man succeed in stopping this menace or will he lose his life?
A story about courage and the limitless power of the imagination for those who may feel like they are powerless but who have great strength that lies within just waiting to be unleashed.
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Let the workshop begin!